Summary of tutorial discussion
Great use of drawing to explore your ideas and document your samples. You’ve carefully selected media to capture the qualities of your yarn materials.
You liked the neutral yarn collection best as the colour is more cohesive, but it’s not as exciting in the use of materials or structure. More traditional and well crafted. Try to critically evaluate the outcomes more in this way. Which do you like and why? How could they be improved?
“I feel I have pushed a lot farther in this assignment and have been more experimental, allowing the ideas to form from one piece to another, keeping an open mind about the developments and the interpretation of yarn.” – This comes across. The development feels fluid and logical, playful and experimental.
– Logical exploration. Sketchbook ideas easy to navigate.
– Some great pages of idea exploration through drawing! Drawing is a real strength. You’ve drawn to propose ideas and drawn from your sampling. Continue to use drawing to capture ideas, especially those you might not have time to make (like the organza translucency ideas).
– Good use of short notes to document evaluations.
– To push your drawing to the fore, the sketchbook could have less “narrative” in writing – e.g. “I have never done weaving before…” Reduce to bullet points. Don’t write draft reflections in the sketchbook.
– Research highlighted as not enjoyable or inspirational.
– The writing is a little descriptive and mainly summarises what you’ve read, rather than what you’ve learned.
Rather than reviewing each link, you could have written in a more essay-like format to discuss overall themes, ideas, new innovations emerging from the reading over all.
– Don’t duplicate content from the sketchbook. Try to think of the sketchbook as the ‘in-project’ document –where you explore your ideas and samples as you’re working – and the learning log as a place to reflect on and evaluate your work and approach to it.
– End of project reflection evaluated your approach and your process well. Be more specific about what work you think is the strongest or most interesting, and why. Use photographs to visually communicate these too us.
Drawing: Great use of drawing to explore ideas and document samples. You’ve thoughtfully selected media to draw the different yarn materials.
Sketchbook: You’ve drawn samples you didn’t have time to make, which makes the sketchbook a great resource for future work.
Sampling: Good range of materials and approaches explored.
Areas for development
Sketchbook: Reduce the written narrative to allow your drawings to do the talking.
Research: Focus on what you’re being asked to study, and what you hope to understand from the research. Write answers based on this.
Evaluation: Highlight pieces / collections you think are most successful. Use photograph to zoom into your samples – to select areas you like most.
Pointers for the next assignment
• Reflect on this feedback in your learning log and write actions based on strengths and weaknesses discussed.
Reflection on tutor feedback:
I am very happy with my tutor feedback for this assignment. I find the video tutorials invaluable for discussing and explaining why I did certain things. I seem to find it easier to evaluate my work when I am asked direct questions about it in the tutorial, rather than when I am trying to do a written evaluation of my work. Discussion through talking seems to better highlight how I feel about my work so I think I need to go back and edit maybe or add to what I have written after my feedback.
I need to keep a separate narrative of my work in either another notebook or on post it notes that can be removed from my sketchbook. I write everything down as I go along so I can remember everything when it comes to writing it up on my blog, but I totally understand the need not to duplicate as assessors may assume they have already read it in my sketchbook when in fact I may have added more detail in the blog write up. Also, I think the sketchbook will look nicer without lots of my messy writing.
I need to write in a more essay style way with my research. I need to write more about what I have learnt from the research rather than a summary of what I have read. I shall aim to research all the links, make notes and then write up what I have learnt or what has inspired me.
Remember to use zoomed in photos to show detail of more subtle pieces of work and to use photos in my evaluation to show which pieces I feel are strongest and why.